I had trouble understanding some of the dialogue due to how fast the VAs spoke, but other than that, this was great!

Fantastic work! The only thing that bugged me was the watercolor filter over the flashbacks because it muddied the image a bit, but that's a tiny gripe.
Super impressive work!

I love it when people explain lore behind their OCs. Very cool!

I really like both of them, honestly.
The old one kinda looks like a manga panel, and the new one looks like someone made a slick anime adaptation of that manga.
Both are very nicely done.

Fantastic work! Many fond memories fighting this guy at my bowling alley's Neo Geo machine...